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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is avery difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

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Nowadays people know multiple foreign
languages
 because of communication with foreign clients. So, Many experts argue that children start learning a foreign
language
 in primary grades rather than secondary school. There are both merits and demerits for start learning foreign
languages
 at primary standards. In recent times,
the
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scientist believes that learning new
languageslanguages
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languages languages
 is better to start learning at little age but, I believe that it's difficult to learn multiple
languages
 at primary age because it's hard to pronounce and communicate with foreign
language
 and they mix up
languages
 and outweigh the miss communication.
However
, it's truly said that the ages of 0 -10 are best for learning
a
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new things and easily absorbing new information.
While
,
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the
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teenager who starts learn learning foreign
languages
 at secondary school found it hard to learn. Students only focus on learning new
languages
 and forgot about
another subject
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.
Furthermore
, certain specialists argue that secondary school students find it hard to learn another
language
 because they master
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pronunciation and know more synonyms in their native
language
.
Moreover
, pupils who know multiple
languages
 overcome results in other fields and they find out easily employment in future. In conclusion, people
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help
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 their children to teach them at primary standards and
also
,
help
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 them
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 their mistakes and
improve
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 their ability to learn new
languages
. Government should
starts
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 adding some foreign
languages
in
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 their education system which helps
them
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