The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The line graph illustrates the number of inquiries of
information
in the half year that the
tourist
office
of the United Kingdom gets in three different ways.
Overall
, two of the three ways of getting
information
which
are
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in person and by
telephone
have a similar
trend
and become popular
while
the other one, namely via letter/email, began to be abandoned. In the first month of the year, most
tourists
which are around 900 travellers in the
UK
ask for
tourist
information
from the
UK
tourist
office
via
telephone
,
while
only about 750
tourists
get
information
from email/letter, and
then
only less than 500
UK
tourists
get
information
when they visit the
tourist
office
and asking in person. In February, the
tourist
who asked via letter or email, and
telephone
slightly decrease to around 800 and 700 respectively. The number of
tourists
who inquired about that
office
increased dramatically until the end of the period which reaches more than 1800 and become the most popular. The same
trend
is shown by
telephone
, even though between March and April the
trend
remains stable at 1000 and continues to rise significantly until 1600 in June.
On the other hand
, the number of travellers who want to get
information
about
tourist
activities in the
UK
illustrates a negative
trend
which is around 750 in January and gradually drops to about 700 in march and
then
continues to go down significantly to just under 400 until the next month.
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