You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

#area #neighbors #situation

Dear neighbours, My name is Petter and I am a resident of the Ha Anh Department. I'm writing in connection with the parking problems which I facing for the

last

week. Actually, the main issue is that spot 12 is associated with my parking and I always find some cars parking in my spot. I have to find another spot to parking,

although

your cars parking wrongly. I should inform you that we need to clarify parking spaces for every unit. I would like to everyone has acknowledged about parking. I hope everyone needs to follow the blueprint to know which parking spaces yours belong to avoid parking wrongly. I want to propose to all of you to have a common meeting to discuss the situation. It will be a good opportunity to get to know each other and we can discuss

further

issues. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards Vỹ Nguyễn

Submitted by nguyenhungvy090499 on Wed Mar 01 2023

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