You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir My name is Vy. Currently, I'

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working with Data Quality and my role is Data Engineer. I'

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writing to join in a work-related seminar in Singapore and it will be coming soon a few days later. The seminar will hold in Singapore, I will get on the plane to come to

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country. I'

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happy when you share

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address. I would like to verify

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address. Because I don't wanna take ages to search about it on Internet. I would like to ask you for some detailed information.

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, I heard about the seminar that will organize in July by my friends, but I don't know exactly which dates.

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, kindly give me about details program when the spokesperson will stand for speaking on the stage.

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, I would like to pay for the ticket cost via the Internet. But how much did it cost I'

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forward to hearing from you soon and if you have any questions, please feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and best regards Vỹ

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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