The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart illustrates the
families
expenditures of their weekly income in a country between 1968 and 2018.
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family's
families'
Overall
, their spending in almost all units changed at the end
of period
. Add an article
the period
In addition
, food was the highest item that families
spent on their weekly income at the beginning of period
, Add an article
the period
while
leisure replaced it at the end
.
Having stood at 35% of weekly income in 1968, the percentage of families
spending on food was the most favourable one, followed by that of housing and clothing and footware
, at 10%. Correct your spelling
footwear
In addition
, other sectors were roughly under 9%.
In 2018, despite having at
almost 9% Change preposition
apply
in
the beginning of the year, the proportion of Change the preposition
at
families
expenditures on leisure outnumbered other types, peaking at about 23% of Change noun form
families'
family's
weekly
wage. Add an article
the weekly
a weekly
Furthermore
, the intensity of families
spending on transport and housing increased dramatically, almost doubling. In contrast
, the families
spent on fuel and power, clothing and footware
, and personal goods decreased in Correct your spelling
footwear
this
year, accounting for under 5%, while
that of household goods remained stable during the periods.Submitted by iamlearner9697 on
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