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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss bothe these views and give your opinion

#people #information #research #business #world #bothe
In
this
 modern era,
the
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informational data holds a significant value that makes some
people
to
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think that
,
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"no
information
 should be given out without a price".
while
other
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 believe that all informational
knowledge
 should be provided to all.
People
 who believe that
world
 data should be accessible
by
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 everyone are correct in their own eyes. Because most
of
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the
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humans live in a democratic country and hold their rights to
information
 , speech and media. It will be a great help for our society if all the
information
 about academic, scientific and business achievements were made available to everyone without any fee, it would be beneficial for all. As
People
 would have a chance to develop new skills and have a greater spectrum of
knowledge
.
Although
, it will only be possible in an ideal
world
.
However
, we don't live in a perfect
world
.
In
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these
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time
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people
 would certainly not share any valuable
knowledge
 without charging any fees. And I do agree with it,
for instance
, there are
people
 on social media platforms like YouTube, Freelancer, Skillshare and many more who sell their
knowledge
 of developing skills for a price. In my ,opinion
knowledge
 holds a supreme value and should not be given away.
To conclude
, in
modern
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world
 access to certain
information
in
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is
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 not free because many individuals want to make
profit
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a profit
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 out of their own skills and
knowledge
, there
also
 are some
people
 who share their
knowledge
 out of goodwill.
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