the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea

the diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea
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The diagram depicts the different stages involved in manufacturing black
tea
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. In general, good quality
tea
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leaves are collected for the process and
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, it is fired or dried in an oven or a hot
air
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dryer to get fine black . To be specific, in the initial stage , the buds and the leaves from the top of the
tea
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plant are picked out for producing good quality black
tea
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which
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passes through the second process called withering , where the
air
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is passed through the leaves on a rack , which helps to moisture out 60% of the water from the leaves. next stage there are two steps involved to make black
tea
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the traditional
method
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and the modern
method
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. In the Traditional
method
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,
tea
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leaves proceed in a rollen flat belt for loose packing and which helps to release enzymes from the leaves.
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in the modern
method
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they use cutting , in which leaves are cut, turned and curled so that they can turn into granular pieces which
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send
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to processes called oxidation and fermentation
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, the rolled leaves can spread on tiles or cement can be mixed within enzymes and
air
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so that it can change the colour of the leaves to a copper colour. In the final stage, it is sent to an oven or hot
air
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dryer for drying or frying to release flavour or aroma and in total to moisturize out 97% of the water from the
tea
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leaves.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, air, method with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional method
  • CTC method
  • Manufacturing process
  • Withering
  • Rolling
  • Fermentation
  • Drying
  • Sorting
  • Crushing
  • Tearing
  • Curling
  • Quality
  • Flavor
  • Aroma
  • Technology advancements
  • Environmental considerations
  • Consumer preference
  • Pricing
  • Tea grade categorization
  • Market implications
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