There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development

Nowadays
anger
has become popular in
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community
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, which is affected by covid
pandemic
disease
, and
financial
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crisis. In my opinion, it is a wrong development since it impacts
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health
in a negative way. First of all,
it is clear that
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of
people
became worse because of covid
pandemic
disease
. Since
people
are happier when they spend time with colleagues or friends, being isolated and
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brought some detrimental effects
to
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their
behavior
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such
as
anger
.
The most
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people
prevent
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outrage by talking with friends and hanging out with them. Without community activities,
person
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tends to be angrier because of
lack
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of expression. In
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, it is said that more
people
felt
anger
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their
behavior
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since
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the isolation
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of
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disease
.
Additionally
, some
people
are taking much pressure from their financial
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, which leads to
anger
and fury. Struggling
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finance could bring major
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mind and it is
finally
expressed as outrage.
Moreover
, it is
overall
detrimental to the community because of its affection
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health
. Outrage leads to many possible
health
problems including stress, depression, and diseases.
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, many kids are facing depression because of their unmanaged
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. In most cases, these kids consider secondary school
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negatively
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and express their
anger
, which brings depression and worry to them. Fury could
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possible
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lead them to make
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a wrong
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decision
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instead
of solving their problems in school. Science found that how
anger
brings some diseases which
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specially related to
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.
This
behavior
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could bring some misfunction
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our brain process. If we can see clearly
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some angry
people
, they are impossible to focus and think about something carefully. In conclusion, it is true that
anger
is widely spreading because of covid
pandemic
disease
which led to isolation, and
financial
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crisis which brings
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issue
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to the person. For me,
this
is a negative development since it is becoming our
health
worse.
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  • Outrage culture
  • Amplification
  • Economic hardship
  • Sensationalist
  • Polarization
  • Constructive outcomes
  • Social frustration
  • Divisiveness
  • Societal norms
  • Historical context
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