The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph presents information about the volume of tourists in three leading airports, namely
John
F
. Kennedy
, LaGuardia, and Newark. The data compare figures collected from 1995 to 2000. Overall
, it can be noted that LaGuardia had the highest record of visitors all throughout the period except in 1997, when the greatest number
was noted in
by Change preposition
apply
John
F
. Kennedy
airport
. Capitalize word
Airport
Also
, the number
of visitors at John
F
. Kennedy
airport
showed a fluctuating trend Capitalize word
Airport
while
the rest depicted a general upward pattern. In detail, during the first year, LaGuardia started at around 35 million
passengers, which was the highest at that time compared to its counterparts. Following that period, there was a gradual increase in the number
of visitors reaching up to 50 million
in 1999 before it further
peaked at
2000 with nearly 70 Change preposition
in
million
, which was almost twice as much as the initial record. The second highest account in 1995, which was approximately 26 million
, was set by John
F
. Kennedy
airport
. The succeeding two years saw Capitalize word
Airport
a
continuous growth in numbers until 1997 when it reached its highest at roughly 48 Correct article usage
apply
million
. This
figure, however
, went on a decline until 1999 before it rose again to an estimate
Replace the word
estimated
of
42 Change preposition
apply
million
in the final year. Meanwhile, there was an uninterrupted increase in the number
of passengers in Newark airport
from 1995 to 1998, starting at approximately 15 million
and climbing to just over 40 million
after three years. The latter figure remained unchanged for another two years.Submitted by kmaegalilee on
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