Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time with the laws of particular species of plants and animals other that there are more important environmental problems discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is a group of people who believe that right. Now the main concern of nature is losing a defined strain of flora and Fauna
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On one side many species of animals and plants become extinct, it is because of environmental issues. For
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