An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Language
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essential
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express theirChange the noun form
individuals
individual
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and understandings.Some thinkers of society believe that International Correct your spelling
feelings
language
can bring unity especially,understanding and harmony among the nations of the world
.I totally agree on
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its
on
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own
language
and local dailogs
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dialogues
acscent
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accent
sweetness
which have Correct word choice
and sweetness
own
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its own
beautiness
.Some countries like India have around fifteen languages.There is Correct your spelling
business
one
language
for one
region.People
like to talk and express their feeling through their mother toungue
.They feel more confident and energetic by applying local Correct your spelling
tongue
slangs
,Fix the agreement mistake
slang
Idoms
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idioms
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and Pharases
Pharases
and Correct your spelling
phrases
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automatic
which
cannot be ignored.
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and
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contrary
have
their own mother Change the verb form
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tounge
and Correct your spelling
tongue
one
national language
which connect
the whole nation. When Correct subject-verb agreement
connects
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other purposes
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difficulties
situation
the national Add a comma
,situation
language
connect
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connects
people
and their life style
becomes Correct your spelling
lifestyle
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.Correct your spelling
easy
Likewise
There should be a common international Add a comma
,Likewise
laguage
which will Correct your spelling
language
conect
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connect
all
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apply
the
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over the
world
like a family.There will be growth
of import and export,sharing love and relationship will Add an article
the growth
a growth
be develop
.There will be sharing of art ,culture and Change the verb form
be developed
litereture
. Sharing Correct your spelling
literature
of
technology would be a great pace .Change preposition
apply
People
will discuss about
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apply
world
problem
like Population,climate change,Fix the agreement mistake
problems
economy
,Correct word choice
and economy
People
can discuss how they can create a world
where every person has right
to live.
In Conclusion,No Correct article usage
the right
one
can deny the sweetness and existance
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existence
mothertongue
,Correct your spelling
mother tongue
mother-tongue
regional
languages but there should be Correct word choice
and regional
one
one
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which will bind people
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a whole
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