Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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Nurturing is a highly discussed topic in our world nowadays,
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, almost no one knows how to do it properly. Some parents purchase and allow to do their
children
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to whatever they want. There are several negative aspects of
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a
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of raising your
child
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. A
child
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's behaviour in the future definitely depends on the basics which were given by parents during growing up. In
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childhood
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immature people can not identify what is right and what is wrong and
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reason
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allowing
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to act in a
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they want is not the best choice.
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of
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baby
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could become spoiled and unpatient with
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opinions which is not appropriate for living in a society and could be estimated as a disadvantage of
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way
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of nurturing.
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, if you buy everything for your
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, a
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will not understand the value of money and get the point that nothing comes to you without working for that.
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, a sense of freedom or self-confidence is an essential feeling for
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young people which are
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of
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a raising method.
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, parents should raise their
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in a balanced
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,
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, teach them that if
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want to get a toy or spend
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free time with friends, a
baby
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will
ought to
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be a high achiever at school, do household duties, generally speaking, be a good representative of society. In conclusion, nurturing
children
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is a difficult process and you should get as much knowledge about it as possible before making a
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.
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a
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in a fully
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controlled environment may not be the best choice and could cause some negative aspects
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as spoiling, being rebellious and not well-mannered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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