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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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Nurturing is a highly discussed topic in our world nowadays,
moreover
, almost no one knows how to do it properly. Some parents purchase and allow to do their
children
 to whatever they want. There are several negative aspects of
such
 a
way
 of raising your
child
. A
child
's behaviour in the future definitely depends on the basics which were given by parents during growing up. In
the
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childhood
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 immature people can not identify what is right and what is wrong and
for
this
reason
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 allowing
children
 to act in a
way
 they want is not the best choice.
As a result
 of
this
process
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baby
 could become spoiled and unpatient with
other's
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 opinions which is not appropriate for living in a society and could be estimated as a disadvantage of
this
way
 of nurturing.
Therefore
, if you buy everything for your
child
, a
baby
 will not understand the value of money and get the point that nothing comes to you without working for that.
On the other hand
, a sense of freedom or self-confidence is an essential feeling for
a
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young people which are
advantages
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 of
such
 a raising method.
However
, parents should raise their
children
 in a balanced
way
,
for example
, teach them that if
you
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 want to get a toy or spend
your
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 free time with friends, a
baby
 will
ought to
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be a high achiever at school, do household duties, generally speaking, be a good representative of society. In conclusion, nurturing
children
 is a difficult process and you should get as much knowledge about it as possible before making a
baby
.
Since raising
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 a
child
 in a fully
under
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controlled environment may not be the best choice and could cause some negative aspects
such
 as spoiling, being rebellious and not well-mannered.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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