Despite the fact that tourism contributes a great deal to economies around the world, it damages local cultures and the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Some people assert that tourism damages local
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and the natural
environment
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in spite of the fact that it helps economically in the world. Is there any merit to
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belief? There are two reasons to support
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idea:
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, the
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destroy them and
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, governments spend too
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funds on promoting tourism. First of all, we must recognize that
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unconsciously tend to destroy local
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and the
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the fact that many of them do not follow local rules. These can include visiting prohibited areas or disturbing staff who are engaged in cultural professions. By way of an example,
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from overseas concentrate to enjoy their travel and ignore the rules which aim to protect local
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and the natural
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.
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the article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper published
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week, eight of ten Japanese who work for temples in Kyoto answered that because many visitors from foreign countries carved their name on the wall of the building even though it is prohibited, they felt the culture and
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were gradually damaged.
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,
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have adverse impacts on them.
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, governments invest less money in protecting
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and the
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than in the tourist industry.
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causes serious problems related to these. In fact, research recently conducted by The University of Tokyo discovered that the Government of Japan can allocate 6 billion dollars to the cultural and environmental areas a year if they stop spending too much money on the tourist industry.
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, many Japanese people now claim that the government protect their culture and natural
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rather than welcoming tourist which simply increases the GDP. In conclusion, there are serious disadvantages caused by tourism because
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do not follow local rules to protect local
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and the
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, and governments do not pay attention to them very much. We should consider the situation and take action to make
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better.
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