Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
People
are mostly inclined to migrate to other countries at present than in the past. It is to say that, for their adaptation to the new place, migrants should leave their own previous lifestyles and ought to follow the local customs and Use synonyms
norms
. I personally disagree with Use synonyms
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viewpoint because cultural Linking Words
behaviour
and Use synonyms
norms
are the identity of Use synonyms
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nation and migration should not refrain them from practising it.
On the Use synonyms
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hand, every Use synonyms
country
has their own culture and there is no doubt. Those who are in search of better opportunities and secure living, migrate to a foreign Use synonyms
country
and encounter a new environment, Use synonyms
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, and culture. Use synonyms
However
, it does not mean that they are bound to follow the Linking Words
norms
of that foreign Use synonyms
country
leaving their own ways of Use synonyms
behaviour
behind. Rather practicing their own Use synonyms
behaviour
and customs could provide that Use synonyms
country
a cultural diversity which might be a good example in the world. Take Use synonyms
for example
Australia. It is popularly known as a culturally diverse Linking Words
country
in which 80% of inhabitants are migrants and they are free to follow their own Use synonyms
norms
and behaviours and nothing is creating any problem about that.
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On the other hand
, someone's own lifestyle and Linking Words
behaviour
is associated with his or her existence and identity. Use synonyms
People
mostly migrate for development but if they are compelled to change their past Use synonyms
norms
the result of migration would be negative. If Use synonyms
people
change it and adopt a new Use synonyms
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, that would not be good for their development. Use synonyms
As a result
, they will forget their roots and will suffer from identity crises. Linking Words
For example
, in Linking Words
one
state of England, migrated Use synonyms
people
are bound to follow the present cultural Use synonyms
behaviour
leaving behind their past ones. Eventually, that results in a fall in migration in that province because Use synonyms
people
do not like it . Use synonyms
Thus
. the result of forgetting Linking Words
one
's own ways of life is not always beneficial.
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To conclude
, migrants should be given the opportunity Linking Words
of practising
their own lifestyle, Change preposition
to practise
norms
, and Use synonyms
behaviour
. It would not be beneficial to leave someone's Use synonyms
behaviour
and lifestyle because without it a particular nation cannot thrive.Use synonyms
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