Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Dear Anna, It's been so long since we saw each other but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent together

last

year. I hope everything is going well for you. David is moved to Panasonic Appliances in New York , as a regional online sales manager, He told me that they have a new job opening for a social media marketing manager. When David told me about the opening my mind blew your name. we discussed your incredible talent in social media marketing and past experience. As you are planning to move to New York,

this

job will be suitable for you. The office of the company is just five

minute

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walk from the city centre. Their payment scales are

also

very attractive.

Moreover

,the firm has various employee benefit schemes. You can

also

stay with me until you find suitable accommodation. I have a spare room. I will try to bake you strawberry tart, your favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. Please send your CV to David's email. Hope we will see you again. With love, Jennifer

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

181 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

The Closing

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