With a growing population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Hunger
is one of the important problems that
needs
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attention considering
an
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increase
of
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Earth’s population. There is an opinion that
GM
foods could solve
this
issue. In my opinion, I believe that
GM
food
technology can help to provide
food
for all people throughout the world. Some people believe that transgenic
food
is dangerous.
Therefore
, there are concerns that GMO
plants
can affect the human gene system and cause cancer and infertility,
although
research about it is very limited. Scientists claim that genetically altered
food
is safe for human health and there are GMO
plants
that are allowed to be used by the government.
Nevertheless
, authorities should keep an eye on
this
technology and if there will be in the future evidence that we can’t consume
GM
food
, we should probably look for another way to resolve
hunger
, but as a temporary solution it could be considered.
Secondly
, properties obtained
as a result
of genetic modification of
food
are growth acceleration,
improvement
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and improvement
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of nutritional and technological properties of products.
For example
,
mostly
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most
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bioengineering
plants
are resistant to insect pests meaning that growing costs are reduced.
Additionally
, genetically improved seeds can increase the harvest
than
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more than
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normal seeds.All these factors lead to ease and cheap
food
production.
To conclude
, I believe that
GM
foods could be a possible solution to
hunger
. But there is a certain responsibility on the government to control
GM
plants
developing in part of danger to human health.
Thus
, until proven that bioengineered
food
is dangerous, it can be the way to escape
hunger
in places where
this
problem has become critical.
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