With a growing population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Hunger

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is one of the important problems that

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attention considering

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increase

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Earth’s population. There is an opinion that

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foods could solve

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issue. In my opinion, I believe that

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food

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technology can help to provide

food

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for all people throughout the world. Some people believe that transgenic

food

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is dangerous.

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, there are concerns that GMO

plants

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can affect the human gene system and cause cancer and infertility,

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research about it is very limited. Scientists claim that genetically altered

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is safe for human health and there are GMO

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that are allowed to be used by the government.

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, authorities should keep an eye on

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technology and if there will be in the future evidence that we can’t consume

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food

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, we should probably look for another way to resolve

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, but as a temporary solution it could be considered.

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, properties obtained

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of genetic modification of

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are growth acceleration,

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and improvement

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of nutritional and technological properties of products.

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bioengineering

plants

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are resistant to insect pests meaning that growing costs are reduced.

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, genetically improved seeds can increase the harvest

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normal seeds.All these factors lead to ease and cheap

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production.

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, I believe that

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foods could be a possible solution to

hunger

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. But there is a certain responsibility on the government to control

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plants

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developing in part of danger to human health.

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, until proven that bioengineered

food

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is dangerous, it can be the way to escape

hunger

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in places where

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problem has become critical.

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With a growing population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Companies nowadays rarely offer long term contract to their employees. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this practice?

Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: ﻿﻿Your reason for writing ﻿﻿What you would like to happen ﻿﻿A nice, respectful style.

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen A nice, respectful style.