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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that
people
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 nowadays tend to face many
health
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problems
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 which are sometimes caused by high
sugar
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 levels in
food
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 and drink
products
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 that are produced by various manufacturing industries.
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, it is argued that consumer goods with
sugar
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 contained should have high prices to make
people
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 avoid consuming a lot of sugary
products
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. I disagree with
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 statement because
sugar
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 is still an essential nutrient and expensive sugary
food
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 and drink affect some businesses. In the following paragraphs, the reason to support my opinion will be discussed in detail. First of all,
sugar
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 is an essential nutrient for our bodies because it makes energy and keeps ourselves to be active. If sugary
products
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 are too expensive, some
people
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 can’t effort to buy
products
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 with contained
sugar
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.
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, they tend to consume too less of
sugar
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 required per day and it leads
people
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 to get energy less than the standard, worsening their
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 in the long run.
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,
sugar
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 taxes in some countries made some sweet
food
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 high prices,
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and some
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 poor
people
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 in remote areas can’t buy
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food
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 because of high costs.
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, they tend to have many
health
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problems
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 as the effect of consuming less
sugar
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 in daily life.
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, even if the high price of sugary
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 may work to make
people
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 consume less
sugar
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, the too expensive price of sugary goods will
also
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 make businesses suffer from the number of customers lost.
This
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 can lead to other
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such
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 as poverty, and unemployment to name but a few.
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, it may destroy economic systems which is worse than making some
people
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 avoid eating too much
sugar
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. In conclusion, even though
sugar
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 may affect
health
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problems
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, we can avoid these cases by consuming it in suitable quantities. Expensive sugary
products
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 do not always work to reduce the number of
sugar
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 consumed by
people
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 because
people
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 still need
sugar
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 as an essential nutrient and some entrepreneurs may face losing their revenue and profits, leading to other
problems
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 in the country or the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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