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Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has long been the subject of discussion about the way misdeeds reporting by the news. Some people believe that reporting crimes in detail to the public must not be done. I agree with
this
 statement and in
this
 essay, I will discuss it in detail by providing relevant examples. Nowadays, misconduct has been increasing gradually in the
last
 few decades in the world because technology is used for criminal activities rather than using it to prevent them.
Firstly
, the way of reporting crimes causes to increase in the lawlessness rate.
For example
, If any news reports a crime in a way the receiver gets interested in, the young generation might tend to test similar things blindly. Some irresponsible publishing does
this
 in order to increase views. If a child does a similar thing as the publishing show, it may be irreversible.
This
 affects both individuals
as well as
 society. Another thing I would like to emphasize is that reporting criminal activities with personal details
such
 as name, address and photographs of the suspect might be a threat to his or her family members.
For instance
, a person takes into custody as a suspect for a particular misdeed
,
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 and publishes all details of him or her publishing.
Thereafter
,
further
 investigations reveal that
this
 person is not the victim of that particular crime. But at the time when he or she is acquitting, it might be badly damaged not only to his or her personality but
also
 to relatives
due to
 irresponsible reporting.
To conclude
, detailed case reporting has several disadvantages to both individuals and the community
such
 as imitating juveniles, and damage to the personality and family members who is not the victim of that particular misconduct.
According to
 my opinion, the lawlessness rate increases
due to
 irresponsible publishing activities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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