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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of
consumer
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 expenditure split by different products and countries
such
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 as Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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 in the year 2002. For food/drink/tobacco,
Turkey
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 has the highest
consumer
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 spending at 32.14%
while
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 Ireland is the first runner-up with 28.91%. Spain is second runner-up with 18.80% in the same category, Italy is in fourth place with 16.36% and in
last
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 place
is
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in
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 Sweden at 15.77%. For the clothing/footwear category,
consumer
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 spending in
Turkey
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 is not the highest but Italy has the highest spending at 9.00%.
However
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, in the leisure/education category,
consumer
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 spending in
Turkey
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 is the highest at 4.35%
while
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 Italy is in third place at 3.20%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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