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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while other believe that it is better to straight after school. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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Some would say that people should study tertiary
education
 in order to be successful,
while
 others are of the opinion that it is better to
work
 after graduation from school.
This
 essay agrees with the first opinion and will show that despite receiving the experience that individuals can get from working, gaining
knowledge
 in higher
education
 is essential for a career. Some believe that individuals ought to receive proper
knowledge
 to succeed in their careers.
This
 is because, at university or college, students would be focused on how to do their
work
 in
a
Correct article usage
the
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 right way and get an
education
 related to their profession so it would be easy for them to
do
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great
successes
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 in their
work
 later and get promotions.
For instance
, many professionals can do their tasks twenty times faster and better
due to
 their understanding of how to do it properly and they are valuable among their colleagues. In comparison, many students go working straight after school endings to gain experience and get career development. These people can get needed
knowledge
 in process of doing a job and not waste their time on tertiary
education
 just because they do not need to have special
education
 for some jobs and be promoted faster.
For example
, many call centres do not require higher
education
 because they believe they can teach their employees by themselves, workers just should have ambition;
however
, they can be lost in the path of some difficult tasks in their occupation. In conclusion, individuals can go working after they graduated from school but it can have some consequences
such
 as struggling with difficult tasks and not having accurate
knowledge
 enough for doing their
work
 correctly.
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