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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parent's home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, it has become more popular among youngsters and students to leave their
parents
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parent's
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house
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 after graduating. In
this
 essay, I will agree with
this
 approach because it will give a lot of benefits to teenagers.
Firstly
, I will discuss how the process of living separately from a family
affect
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 people’s responsibility, and
secondly
, I will consider how their
decision making
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 is changing.
To begin
 with, when a young person moves to their own place he or she
begin
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begins
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 an adult life full of responsibilities
also
 based on
its
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his
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 actions. All the processes
such
 as paying the rent, doing grocery shopping and organizing a living space depend on one person. In fact, during college teens are getting used to responsibility and it might help them to become more confident in their future life.
For instance
, in some European countries university students prefer an apartment
instead
of
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dormitories.
Furthermore
, when a youngster begins to live
separate
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 from their
parents
 they start to learn how to make decisions in
a
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the
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 most efficient way in order not
arrive
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to arrive
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 with no
money
on
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in
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 their pockets.
This
 is because there is not a budget controlled by
parents
 anymore and when spending
money
 students should be careful and allocate them correctly.
Moreover
,
money
assume
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 a new value for them and
this
 might change their attitude towards
money
 and work too.
For example
, a lot of young people when living with their
parents
 do not think about expenses. In conclusion, I think that living separately would be very beneficial for a youngster since they might become more responsible and put a lot more effort
in
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into
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 how to use their
money
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