The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table provided gives information on the underground
railway
systems in terms of the routes covered, passengers
travelling annually and the year the railway
system was initiated. The indicated information in the table is for six cities.
As per the table, the oldest underground railway
service provider is in London and also
covers the longest rail routes (1863 and 394 km of routes). On the other hand
, Los Angeles is the latest as it opened in 2001 and covers the second least railway
route of 28 km.
Furthermore
, Tokyo
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the Tokyo
railway
service initiated in 1927 but consists the
largest number of travellers (1927 Change preposition
of the
passengers
) among all other six cities, while
It is Kyoto that consists of the least number of travellers (45 passengers
).
Overall
, two of the oldest systems are London and Paris but it is Paris and Tokyo that has
a large number of Correct subject-verb agreement
have
passengers
travelling annually; meanwhile, it is London that has the largest route travelled (394 km).Submitted by rasoolkhazaei995 on
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