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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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It is an undeniable fact that some
animals
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 are almost out of existence and others may suffer similar faith.
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, I will state that the lack of animal conservation and indiscriminate human activities contribute to
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 effect, and
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 argue that educating the public and enacting laws will help sustain species diversity. On the one hand, the absence of appropriate conservatories continues to be the main reason why
animals
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 go extinct. The lack of animal parks and zoos leave them unprotected and
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, become prone to poaching.
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, some bad practices
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 as; overfishing, bushfires and hunting, carried out by humans indiscriminately
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 play a major role in animal extinction. A survey conducted in the northern part of Ghana in 2020, indicated that the number of quarries has decreased significantly over the years
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 extensive amount of hunting.
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, public awareness through education on the economical and social importance of wildlife will help change human attitudes towards
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 and
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, promote their lives.
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 an article published in 2021, South Africa has well-preserved national parks and zoos which attract lots of tourism and
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 boost the economy of the nation.
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, policymakers should enact laws to protect species diversity and regulate human activities that can result in the loss of
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. In conclusion, a lack of animal conservation and some harmful human practices
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 as bushfires result in the disappearance of some animal species. But public education and enacting laws will help prevent
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 extinction and
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, promote the economy of the nation as a whole.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • endangered animals
  • biodiversity
  • habitat loss
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • conservation efforts
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • human overpopulation
  • sustainable development
  • responsible consumption
  • education
  • awareness programs
  • protected areas
  • wildlife reserves
  • international cooperation
  • collaboration
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