More and more people want to own items such as car, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brand. What are the reasons for this? Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

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It is said that some societies are becoming more interested in buying
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produced by renowned companies.
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in my point of ,view it is an unwelcoming change, In
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essay I will illustrate some underlying cases. There are different reasons why
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like to buy brandy
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. First and foremost, some consumers think these companies can make
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of higher quality. Nowadays companies by advertisement try to influence buyers, they boasting about the quality and features of their goods.
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,
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might buy an item based on the name of the
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and the advertisements.
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but not least, some buy
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to show off. Buyers think, if they buy luxurious goods from a renowned
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, they would show others
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as other siblings or friends they are well off and financially strong.
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, Alibaba is a travel agent in Iran that copied its name with a Chinese
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to use the publicity of the main
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and make
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rely more on them . It is clear
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new trend in society can bring about several detrimental consequences for society.
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, It can put more financial strain on families. Consider a Lap top from Apple
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with another
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, in many cases in spite of being exactly the same ,the apple made one is more expensive only because it is produced by Apple and when a person or a family want to buy a laptop has to pay more and put a strain on its budget. In conclusion, the advertisement makes
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buy some products from brands and I believe it can be financially detrimental and put pressure on families' budgets.
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