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IN SOME COUNTRIES MORE AND MORE ADULTS ARE CONTINUING TO LIVE WITH PARENTS EVEN AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION AND GETTING JOBS. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWIEGH DISADVANTAGES.

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Definitely,it is true to say that in a few ,nations a large number of mature individuals looking to live with their nurture even with finishing their studies and pursuing jobs.In my opinion,
this
 trend has some disadvantages but it has much more advantages. primary,many adults these days are forgotten their
towards
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parents
 in order to get a victorious carrier in their life and
parents
 have to suffer a lot
these problem
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this
 problem these problems It appears that the plural demonstrative
these
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is modifying the singular noun problem. Consider using a singular demonstrative or a plural noun
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the
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old age.
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 in the modern1 era many people old people have to choose
old
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 age orphanage to survive
rest
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 of life.and
thus
,if youngsters can do their work in
near by
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 home town
then
 they absolutely help to improve the
life
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 of their
parents
.
moreover
,
parents
also
 aids to teach and care our own children when we are busy in our works and which helps children for learning some important skills and behaviour from their
grand
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parents
. Despite
of
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the fact that living with
the
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parent has
a
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significant advantages but nowadays money is
also
 very vital to reside and many people leave their job
due to
 the fact that they want to live with their family and
such
 type of decision create difficulties to make the money
with out
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 a job.
Furthermore
,disputes after
marraige
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marriage
with in
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within
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 the family
is
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 quite often nowadays
therefore
 many masses try to live in
different
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 place from their hometown after their marriage in order to maintain
a
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good relations with their family. In conclusion,
although
 living with
mother
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 and father create certain problems but advantages
by
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 living with them has far more than
disadvantage
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.
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