It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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? in their professional
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.It's very much important to take
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. More on, we should not mix our personal and professional
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taking can lead to good family
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, fewer problems and fewer arguments and many more benefits. On another hand, explaining professional
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risk-taking can lead us to have confidence and many more advantages. More on, the advantages of taking
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can outweigh the disadvantages
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in both the factors to learn and gain knowledge that what you can gain in future .
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.there are advantages and disadvantages to taking
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, but it is more important to have a better understanding of how
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for good or maybe not.taking
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