Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Explain what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website

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Dear Sir, I am writing to seek your services as a website designer in regard to promoting my Business. I have recently opened a salon

along with

an internal boutique for ladies only. As most of the residents are unaware of

this

salon, I would love to use your assistance to spread the word among the individuals. Let me explain my expectations, first of all, I want to post pictures of our client's make-up looks as per their consent and

also

the new designs of our Punjabi traditional clothes to attract customers. Apart from that, regular updates should be there to inform about any discounts or special offers to people. An option for bookings appointments would be icing on the cake. As I am fond of taking pictures and

also

brilliant at it. I prefer to click photos by myself and sent them to your company email. After consideration of my offer, I hope you will provide me with details including the list of prices Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Dilpreet

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

174 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a company to ask about having them develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Explain what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to slove them?

In some countries university students live away from home and in another cities wile study. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another cities?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?