Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.

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era, learners can be divided
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into
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two different groups.
First,
the students who study in the same location with their
family
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families
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, and the others move
into
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to
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another area to finish their academic track. There are several merits and demerits from both perspectives which will be detailed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, youngsters who live
with
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their
domestical
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domestic
ecosystem like family will gain numerous benefits. One of them, they do not have to feel
psychology
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problems
such
as
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being home
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home sick
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homesick
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. The earlier issue is a serious
problem
in view of it can reduce scholars' motivation to study,
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a result, their academic will be damaged.
For instance
, when I had to finish my internship
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of years ago, I felt
this
kind of phenomenon which distracted me from my daily routine jobs.
Although
, I just learned
during
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three months, living far away from family can trigger
this
problem
, and perhaps it can
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for someone who are separated
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his family
in
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long
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time. Turning to the second side, going to another city shall make someone
to
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be an
independence
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person. It happens,
due to
students
live
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living
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, perhaps exceedingly far from their safe space, so they should finish their
problem
independently.
Moreover
,
this
kind of occasion will teach us how to be
a
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strong
person
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people
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because we learn something which never
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been
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taught before. For individual example, I used to learn numerous practical techniques like washing clothes and cooking meals when I studied in
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area
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from my parents.
Consequently
, now I am capable to do
those kind
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of activities which are really indispensable.
To conclude
, both scenarios have different advantages and disadvantages. Studying in the same city
with
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our parents may avoid
from
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a psychological
problem
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problems
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such
as
homesick
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wich
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which
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can be affected
to
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apply
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the
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academic results.
However
, learning at
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far location will help us to develop several skills.
Additionally
, it can make us
to
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be
an
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independent person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emotional support
  • Independence
  • Self-reliance
  • Familiar environment
  • Social experiences
  • Responsibility
  • Personal growth
  • Homesickness
  • Financial strain
  • Diverse cultures
  • Networking opportunities
  • Family expectations
  • New identity
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