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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

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Nowadays, the majority of graduate
students
 should go through a free
internship
 in organisations before starting
work
.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of working for free and provide a logical conclusion, showing that in my opinion, the benefits of an
internship
 in a competitive world exceed its downside. One evident benefit to getting
work
 free at the beginning is that it would give the opportunity to perceive knowledge about your job.
For instance
, many graduate young people have only theoretical knowledge from their Universities whether it is law, math or engineering.
In other words
, in the practical world, most part of
this
 knowledge is worth nothing.
As a result
, after
internship
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students
 get more reliable skills. Another advantage
that is
 working free at the beginning gives you
chance
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a chance
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 to pass the adaptation period. It means that new student would be not shy and hesitant when he or she starts working as an employ.
Nevertheless
, awareness of doing something for free is one of the principal drawbacks. Take Kazakh
students
 as an example many of them have hindrances when they
work
 free for a company. The thought that they can’t overcome it will make them nervous.
Secondly
, for some
students
internship
 seems like wasting time.
Thus
 they are not able to be productive as they
work
 for a salary.
To conclude
, it is clear to see that an
internship
 is a great way of developing your skills and getting the
well
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best
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 first part of your career.
Hence
, in my
overall
 opinion, both national and global companies should be implemented and made mandatory for
internship
 graduates.
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