The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of rented books in Malton Town Library in Britain in 2009.
Overall
, it is apparent that the margin fluctuated widely throughout the year with the final share doubled than its level in the first month. Besides
, its highest figure
was in December, while
its lowest point was in February.
Looking into more detail, the figure
started at 10 margin
before Change to a plural noun
margins
fell
by 4 in Wrong verb form
falling
Febuary
in which was the lowest proportion among all Correct your spelling
February
months
. However
, in the following four months
it gradually increased to 15 Add a comma
,months
point
in May, it grew Change to a plural noun
points
for
almost Change preposition
apply
triplefold
compared Correct your spelling
triple fold
triple-fold
those
in February. Change preposition
to those
Then
, the rates were relatively stable for three months
(May, Juny
, and July) they comprised Correct your spelling
June
for
15, 14 and 15, respectively. In August it significantly rocketed Change preposition
apply
for
about 5 figures and stood at 20 Change preposition
by
margin
, Change to a plural noun
margins
then
the figures were dramatically decreasing in the three following months
(September, October, Novermber
) Correct your spelling
November
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
at
12, 14 and 9, respectively. Change preposition
for
In contrast
to that, the book's figure
then
ended the year with a staggering 21 figure
in December.Fix the agreement mistake
figures
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