The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in

2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of rented books in Malton Town Library in Britain in 2009.
Overall
, it is apparent that the margin fluctuated widely throughout the year with the final share doubled than its level in the first month.
Besides
, its highest
figure
was in December,
while
its lowest point was in February. Looking into more detail, the
figure
started at 10
margin
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before
fell
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by 4 in
Febuary
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February
in which was the lowest proportion among all
months
.
However
, in the following four
months
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it gradually increased to 15
point
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in May, it grew
for
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almost
triplefold
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triple fold
triple-fold
compared
those
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in February.
Then
, the rates were relatively stable for three
months
(May,
Juny
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June
, and July) they comprised
for
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15, 14 and 15, respectively. In August it significantly rocketed
for
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by
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about 5 figures and stood at 20
margin
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,
then
the figures were dramatically decreasing in the three following
months
(September, October,
Novermber
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November
)
accounted
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at
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12, 14 and 9, respectively.
In contrast
to that, the book's
figure
then
ended the year with a staggering 21
figure
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in December.
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