The chart below gives information about the number of books rented in a British local library in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart depicts the proportion of rented books in Malton Town Library in Britain in 2009.

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, it is apparent that the margin fluctuated widely throughout the year with the final share doubled than its level in the first month.

Besides

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, its highest

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was in December,

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its lowest point was in February. Looking into more detail, the

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started at 10

margin

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before

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by 4 in

Febuary

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February

in which was the lowest proportion among all

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.

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, in the following four

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it gradually increased to 15

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in May, it grew

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almost

triplefold

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triple fold

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compared

those

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in February.

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, the rates were relatively stable for three

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(May,

Juny

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June

, and July) they comprised

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15, 14 and 15, respectively. In August it significantly rocketed

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about 5 figures and stood at 20

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,

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the figures were dramatically decreasing in the three following

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(September, October,

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November

)

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at

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12, 14 and 9, respectively.

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to that, the book's

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then

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ended the year with a staggering 21

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in December.