You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. Explain the occasion to him. Invite him to the party. Tell him why you want him to perform.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to invite you

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my parent's anniversary as it is going to be 25 years of happily married life on the 13th of December.

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, I am planning to give a theme party to my parents and it will be based on Punjabi tradition.

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, most of

preparations

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the preparations

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have been completed except

planning

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for a concert. So, I would like to invite you and request you to perform a live concert with your team.

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, it would be

pleasure

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meeting you on

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special day

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my whole family like listening to your songs.

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, I am inviting

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join the celebrations and at the same time make it more enjoyable with your melodious voice. Feel free to call me on 75******32 for any

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details. I am hoping to get your positive response on

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matter. Thanking you.

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faithfully, Eva Smith.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

154 words

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Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people think competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believes that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The university is to prepare students for employment or has other functions. Discuss both and give your opinion.