The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graphs compare
stock
values of Facebook, google, apple
and yahoo
over a 5-year period.
Overall
, the stock
rate of apple
significantly fluctuated over the period, while
the stock
value
of yahoo
steadily rose.
In 2011, both yahoo
and Facebook had the highest stock
prices, which stood at around 7500. This
is closely followed by apple
with a price of 5000, while
google had the lowest value
which was around 500. Afterwards, the stock
price of apple
had a significant rise and peaked at 35,000 by
2012. Change preposition
in
Thereafter
, there was a dramatic fall in apple
forex Change noun form
apple's
value
to 6000 by 2013. This
is followed by fluctuation in prices, with market rates settling at 5000 in 2016. On the other hand
, facebook's market value
consistently increased over the years and it rose to a significant 20000 in 2016. However
, this
is in contrast
to stock
rates of Correct article usage
the stock
yahoo
which steadily fell to about 2500 in 2016. Google consistently had the least stock
values over the years reviewed and it settled at the same price it had in 2011.Submitted by murskycharles on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stock, apple, yahoo, value with synonyms.
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