The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies

between 2011 and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

and make comparisons where relevant
The line graphs compare
stock
values of Facebook, google,
apple
and
yahoo
over a 5-year period.
Overall
, the
stock
rate of
apple
significantly fluctuated over the period,
while
the
stock
value
of
yahoo
steadily rose. In 2011, both
yahoo
and Facebook had the highest
stock
prices, which stood at around 7500.
This
is closely followed by
apple
with a price of 5000,
while
google had the lowest
value
which was around 500. Afterwards, the
stock
price of
apple
had a significant rise and peaked at 35,000
by
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in
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2012.
Thereafter
, there was a dramatic fall in
apple
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apple's
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forex
value
to 6000 by 2013.
This
is followed by fluctuation in prices, with market rates settling at 5000 in 2016.
On the other hand
, facebook's market
value
consistently increased over the years and it rose to a significant 20000 in 2016.
However
,
this
is
in contrast
to
stock
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the stock
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rates of
yahoo
which steadily fell to about 2500 in 2016. Google consistently had the least
stock
values over the years reviewed and it settled at the same price it had in 2011.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.

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