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Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages

#museums #charge #admission #people
Nowadays a lot of
museums
 around the world take admission for entrance
while
 others are free .
This
 essay will discuss both views. On the one hand , most
of
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museums
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the museums
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 charge for admission due
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 the fact that they have a lot of gorgeous
and
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historical collections which are very valuable for every land.
Museums
 should pay off their exhibitions and
also
museums
has
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 employee which
work
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 for wages.
In
addition
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 a lot of
museums
 are paid
because
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 of
incredible
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entice
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 of statues.If
this
 kind of
museums
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 will be free a thousand
of
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people will try to get into
this
 place and there will be
mess
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. Another important fact is that
museums
 show
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the tradition
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tradition
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traditions
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 of
nation
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 and antiquities of our culture . Tourists should pay money if they want to acquaint
with
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themselves with
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history
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 of our country . In another hand,
it is clear that
,
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when
museums
 are free
the
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attendance will sharply increase.
Furthermore
, huge attendance
provide
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 knowledge and history of the culture . When citizens or tourists see the exhibition it can be seen, that population start to realise what is their real origin.
Second
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 essential point is discrimination when entry is free of charge there is no division
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 poor and wealthy people. In conclusion, it is credible to argue that
museums
 should be free.From my
experience
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 I believe that everyone can visit and
then
 see
history
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, culture and tradition of his country without money.
Then
 realise that he should be helpful
for
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 his nation like his ancestors
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Admission fee
  • Revenue stream
  • Maintenance
  • Overcrowding
  • Commercialization
  • Cultural heritage
  • Diverse attendance
  • Community ownership
  • Access to culture
  • Visitor experience
  • Exhibit quality
  • Cultural mission
  • Reliance on funding
  • Government subsidies
  • Cultural accessibility
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