The diagram describes the production of canned fruits. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the process of fruit cans production.
It is conspicuous that the whole manufacturing process consists of fourteen distinct stages, from picking the
fruits
to selling the end products in the supermarket.
Before making canned fruits
, there are some previous preparations. At the first stage
of production, those fruits
need to be picked from the trees. Next,
all of them are transported to factories, where the good ones can be selected, weighed and washed, then
kept refrigerated, which makes them easy to be peeled.
The following procedures begin with cutting the peeled ones into pieces. Those pieces are put into some liquid, such
as water, juice, syrup, etc., and then
sealed equally into each can. At the eleventh stage of production, all cans need to be cooked under heat for sterilizing. After cooling down and being packed well, the finished canned fruits
can finally
be on store shelves in the supermarket.Submitted by Evalynn on
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