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Some people think it is better to travel by cars in the city.Others, however think travelling by bicycles is better.Dicuss both views.

#people #travel #cars #city #bicycles #dicuss
People
has
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 been using
transport
 to
accompolish
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accomplish
 their job from the ancient ages.It is argued
by
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some thinkers that
cars
 are the best
for
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the
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means of
transport
while
 others have the opinion that it is the best way to go anywhere.
Undoubtely
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Undoubtedly
the
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cars
 make
the
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life
 more comfortable and
time saving
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 in
present
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the present
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 busy
schudles
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schedules
,
however
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bycycle
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bicycle
keeps the body and
enviornment
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environment
healthy.
This
 essay will discuss
the
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both
side
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sides
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 of the views. On the
one
 hand, Living in a highly evolved technological world
life
 is very
streesful
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stressful
due to
 the
target oriented
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 job.
life
 has
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be
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 very fast in order to full fill the
taget
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target
.It is important to balance both family and office.Completing the responsibility at home ,
one
 has to go office in due
time
 there is the
requirment
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requirement
 of fast means of
transport
 like
cars
 which save
the
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time
 .From
the
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comfortability
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 point of
view
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,view
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 personal
cars
 can fill
the
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human desire,especially in the
crowd
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 population.The Air
condition
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conditioning
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 and standard
life
 of
car
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 give a lot of satisfaction and happiness.
On the other hand
,
Bycycle
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bicycles
 creates
a
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eco friendly
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eco-friendly
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 environment and
polution
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pollution
 free
life
.
The clean
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 energy
help
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the
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human being
as well as
the
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other birds and animals and
one
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 solution
for
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the
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climate change.
On
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the
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 health point of
view
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 people leaving a
sendentary
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sedentary
life style
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lifestyle
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due to
 sitting on
the
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a
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 chair
infront
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in front
 of the computer for
long
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 duration creates
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variety of diseases. Going
to
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anywhere by
Bycle
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bicycle
 gives good exercise to the body and keeps
every
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everyone
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one
 healthy. In conclusion, It cannot be
denyed
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denied
 that
Cars
 save
the
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time
 and
gives
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happyness
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happiness
 as a better means of
transport
,but In my Opinion,
Bycle
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Bicycle
 is the best for
the
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individual health and the better for collective
life
.
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