Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Some folks relate
success
with the upbringing of the
person
.
While
others argue and consider accomplishments as the outcome of the dedication and hard work of any
person
. I believe up to some extent the upbringing of a
person
can play a significant role in getting achievements but mostly it is hard work and timely decisions which bring them close to
success
. In many ways, parental contribution plays a vital role in a
person
's development
such
as
,
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parental influence to get appropriate education which will
further
help in opting for any career.
However
, continuous parental guidance and support may not guaranteed
success
, it is the dedication and commitment of any
person
which influence that
person
to confront extreme challenges that come in between his
success
.
For example
, most successful business tycoons have developed their empires from the ground up.
Although
their upbringing supported them in doing difficult decisions, still it is their effort and courage which lead them and get them accomplished.
On the contrary
, having continuous parental guidance and support may not relieve if a
person
is not capable enough to grasp the available opportunities
then
nothing can be done to get transform that
person
into a successful
person
.
For example
, unsuccessful people usually blame nature for not being successful despite that they have not put much effort to achieve
success
. In conclusion, In my
opinion
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capability to get
success
is in our hands, it only depends on how much energy and dedication we have to transform that capability into any achievement.
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