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Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some folks relate
success
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 with the upbringing of the
person
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.
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 others argue and consider accomplishments as the outcome of the dedication and hard work of any
person
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. I believe up to some extent the upbringing of a
person
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 can play a significant role in getting achievements but mostly it is hard work and timely decisions which bring them close to
success
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. In many ways, parental contribution plays a vital role in a
person
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's development
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 parental influence to get appropriate education which will
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 help in opting for any career.
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, continuous parental guidance and support may not guaranteed
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, it is the dedication and commitment of any
person
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 which influence that
person
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 to confront extreme challenges that come in between his
success
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, most successful business tycoons have developed their empires from the ground up.
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 their upbringing supported them in doing difficult decisions, still it is their effort and courage which lead them and get them accomplished.
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, having continuous parental guidance and support may not relieve if a
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 is not capable enough to grasp the available opportunities
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 nothing can be done to get transform that
person
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 into a successful
person
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.
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, unsuccessful people usually blame nature for not being successful despite that they have not put much effort to achieve
success
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. In conclusion, In my
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 capability to get
success
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 is in our hands, it only depends on how much energy and dedication we have to transform that capability into any achievement.
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