The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The
table
and charts illustrate the information about police
budget in Correct article usage
the police
the
Britain between 2017 and 2018 and the Correct article usage
apply
table
shows Britain's three sources where government get money
and the charts represent how that money
was spent.
Overall
, in the table
the percentage of national government was in the highest proportion Add a comma
,table
both
Change preposition
in both
year
, Fix the agreement mistake
years
while
other sources (eg grants) were in the lowest proportion. In the charts
most of the Add a comma
,charts
money
was spent on the officers ans
Correct your spelling
and
stuff
wages than technology.
It can be seen that in the Correct your spelling
staff
table
the number of money
came
from Correct pronoun usage
that came
national
government from 175.5m to 177.8m between 2017 and 2018 , Add an article
the national
on the other
hand
the percentage of other sources was in the least position at 38m and 38.5m from 2017 to 2018. The figure for local taxes peaked at 102.3m in 2018, before reached at 91.2m in 2017. Total income was at 304.7m which increased in 2018 Add the comma(s)
,hand
of
318.6m
Change preposition
to
However
, most of those
Change the determiner
that money
money
was spent on officers's
and staff 's salaries which Change the noun form
officers
was
75% in 2017 and it decreased slowly to 69%, on Change the verb form
were
Correct article usage
the other
other
side , in 2017 technology was at the least amount Change the wording
another
to
8% and it rose to 14% in 2018. The proportion of building and transport remained stable at 17% in the Change preposition
at
last
two years.Submitted by opshorajhumpa2001 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, money, m with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
▼