As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the content of the exhibition and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discount available.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that we are willing to participate as a group in a social survey program for your historical exhibition in your town. The information was gathered from a notice in a local newspaper. We are a group of students of Colombo University who hope to conduct a social survey program, and it is expected to visit your exhibition in order to collect information about some archaeological features as a part of the aforementioned project.

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, I would like to know a brief description of the content, starting date and end date of the exhibition for the planning purpose of the visit. Another thing I would like to know about discounts because we need some time to get recommendation letters for our project from the university. It is highly appreciated that you provide the aforementioned details as soon as possible in order to organize the visit. Thank you for your attention in

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regard. Yours faithfully,

jds.sampathFri Mar 03 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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164 words

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the content of the exhibition and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discount available.

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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What

In some countries old people are highly valued and in other countries the young are considered to be more valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Or Some cultures value old age while others value young age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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