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Countries should try to produce all the food and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the population has increased in the world, and
as a result
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 more and more
food
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 is been needed to produce and transport to different parts of the nation. Some say it is beneficial if they produce more
food
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 stock and import less as much as possible.
This
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 essay will discuss how producing goods is more useful than importing from another part of the nation. One of the main reasons behind producing
food
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 as it is cheaper if the production and supply have been done by domestic bodies.
Moreover
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, It introduces more jobs to the citizen of the
country
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 which leads to less poverty.
also
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 everyone can get fresh
food
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 and ingredients to cook if it is not been stocked for a long time.
For instance
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, many types of
food
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 have been transported to another
country
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 for revenue, among ,them 10% of
food
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 gets wasted if it gets damaged or delayed.
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, Importing types of goods can be more expensive for receiving
country
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 because of import, production and storage charges.
As a result
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, the market price for that particular
food
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 can be changed and rise.
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, It takes a long time to import via ship, which might lead to more
food
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 waste.
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 Importing looks easy way to provide more options in the market for the people, it can lead to inflation and that can affect the
country
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.
For example
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, Canada receives most of the
food
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 from a different
country
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 as they have only one season to produce the
food
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.
as a result
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 their
food
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 cost has been rising every year. In conclusion, generating all types of
food
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 domestically can be beneficial for domestic people, compared to importing from another
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country country
 for consumption. If the government can provide more facilities to the farmer, that can help them make more income and the public can get fresh
food
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.

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