You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am Lakshmi, living on 10th street in New Westminister, writing

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letter regarding the availability of the LG front-load washing machines in your mart. ,

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I would like to know about the latest versions of the front-load machines which have a high capacity to run the maximum load.

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, I would like to know about the price of the device which is budget friendly for middle-class people.

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, it must consume less power and be energy efficient when we consume continuously with a high load.

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, I really appreciate you if you provide other extra features and wide spin options for different clothes which will not damage delicate clothes.

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is there any hot water facility available for the high-bird product?

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, I would like to know about the after buying the product eighter any damage occurs or not satisfy with the brand is there any money back policy available in your store? Please suggest the best high-quality modern machine that makes our life easier and more comfortable than in the past faced the world. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter with a piece of good news about my concern. Best regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Sat Mar 04 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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