Q. Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of their own

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, rather than those of other countries. I strongly agree with

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opinion because if

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learn about the

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of their own

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they can have a

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of

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and make

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better

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in the

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, learning about other

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is difficult for

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with, it is true that it is significant to teach

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the

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of their

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.

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is because

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can develop a

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of

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for

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one’s

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, when I was an elementary school student, I learned about Korean

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. They were mandatory subjects. Through these

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, I have learned about various kinds of historical stories from how our ancestors protected our

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from invaders to what food Korean people enjoyed in the past. It was quite intriguing for me and it would help me to have a

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of

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and patriotism spirit.

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, by learning about one’s

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young generation can avoid making the same mistakes in the

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. It means they can make better

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history

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in the

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. If teachers teach

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the

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of their

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,

children

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will know about mistakes that their ancestors made before, and

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, they are not going to make the same mistakes and they can make

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future

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, learning about other

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literature

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is challenging for

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kids

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. It is common that the majority of the

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of other

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country

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are written

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different languages. Even though some books have

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, it

still

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hard for

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children

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to understand all of them deeply and correctly.

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70% of the students who took

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world

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school responded it was too difficult to understand.

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is tough and challenging for

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, it is evident that teaching

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one’s

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and

literature

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is more important rather than the

literature

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and

history

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of other countries since it will help

kids

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to have a

sense

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of

identity

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and make better futures.

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, it is still difficult for

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generation to understand another

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’s

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and

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. So, schools teach

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the

literature

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history

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of their own

country

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.