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the graph illustrates the
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percentage
of co2
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emissions
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individual in four countries in the given period (1967-2007).
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word
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tendency
in UK and Sweden ,
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increase in Italy and
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.
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, the four of them are becoming closer to 6 metric tonnes.
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it is start at about 11 metric tonnes in 1967
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to reach less than 9
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2007 ,
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it
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rocket
up to just above 10
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significantly
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started
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it is dramaticaly
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raised
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it steady at 7.5 between the period 1997 and 2007.
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