Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

With the expansion of technology, intelligent

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are distributed in societies. A group of children are entertained by

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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will explain the reasons and the disadvantages of

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issue in children’s

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. Primarily, all parents have to purchase a phone for their kids especially for whom that are going to school. Students are supposed to search for their lesson questions on the internet and they have online classes most of the time.

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, after Covide 19 pandemic classes are held in houses and all children take part in their classes through an application on their

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, they are used to utilizing their

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in each situation.

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, juveniles play online games and wander on social media

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as Instagram and Facebook hours a

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. Being in the room and being far from family is preferred by them.

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, these programs are very attractive and when they occupy them they forget the time.

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, I believe that authorities are supposed to tackle

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issue with practical approaches. Students struggle with their

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for a long time in a

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. What is more, their

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life style

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is changed and they have no movement in their sedentary

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,

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problem not only causes obesity but

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causes forgetting true communication in society because they occupy by their

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instead

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of having a relationship with their friend or attending sports events.

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, being overweight causes many diseases

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as diabetes or heart attack and their health encounter many dangers. What is more, the lack of relationships is an obstacle for them to being successful in their future

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, they will face speaking problems in the interview for a career.

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parents and teachers should prevent

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this overusing cellphones

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and they can enact some laws.

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, teenagers can be entertained by their

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just for an hour each

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. In conclusion, because of the bad effects that smartphones have, like obesity or social problems. Their usage should be limited by parents and tutors.