Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

With the expansion of technology, intelligent

phones

are distributed in societies. A group of children are entertained by

this

many times in

day

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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will explain the reasons and the disadvantages of

this

issue in children’s

life

. Primarily, all parents have to purchase a phone for their kids especially for whom that are going to school. Students are supposed to search for their lesson questions on the internet and they have online classes most of the time.

For example

, after Covide 19 pandemic classes are held in houses and all children take part in their classes through an application on their

phones

.

Therefore

, they are used to utilizing their

phones

in each situation.

In addition

, juveniles play online games and wander on social media

such

as Instagram and Facebook hours a

day

. Being in the room and being far from family is preferred by them.

Furthermore

, these programs are very attractive and when they occupy them they forget the time.

Secondly

, I believe that authorities are supposed to tackle

this

issue with practical approaches. Students struggle with their

phones

for a long time in a

day

. What is more, their

life style

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is changed and they have no movement in their sedentary

life

.

Hence

,

this

problem not only causes obesity but

also

causes forgetting true communication in society because they occupy by their

phones

instead

of having a relationship with their friend or attending sports events.

Therefore

, being overweight causes many diseases

such

as diabetes or heart attack and their health encounter many dangers. What is more, the lack of relationships is an obstacle for them to being successful in their future

life

.

For example

, they will face speaking problems in the interview for a career.

Thus

parents and teachers should prevent

this overusing cellphones

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and they can enact some laws.

For instance

, teenagers can be entertained by their

phones

just for an hour each

day

. In conclusion, because of the bad effects that smartphones have, like obesity or social problems. Their usage should be limited by parents and tutors.