You are employed full-time and also doing a part-time evening course. You are not able to continue the course. Write a letter to the course lecturer.

#course #lecturer

Dear Mr Phillip, I am a pupil of your evening Spanish language

course

in which I got enrolled

last

week.

However

, I will not be able to continue the

course

due to

a sudden foreign official tour. I am hoping that you would allow me to intake it

from

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next semester. I am working in the risk management division of Prime Bank Limited.

This

bank has a subsidiary company in Hong Kong where an incident has been reported by the governing authority. For that, I will have to travel to Hong Kong next week with a team to analyze the whole situation, scrutinise the allegations against the company and take appropriate measures. The whole process might take more than two months, and I cannot continue my evening language

course

under your supervision for that. Under the circumstances, I would like to request you

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transfer me to the next semester and allow me to take the

course

without any

further

registration. Your cooperation in

this

regard will be highly appreciated.

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

170 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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