The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
The line graph above illustrates the
number
of thefts
for every thousand
vehicles
in 4 different countries over a decade, from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, over the course of 10 years
, Great Britain
remains the country that has the highest number
of people who steals vehicles
. For the majority of the period, Canada is the country that has the lowest thefts
per thousand
vehicles
.
With regards to the trend for Great Britain
, every 4 years
, the number
of thefts
reaches its peak and starts to drop again. It started from approximately 17,000 to 20,000, in 1990 to 1993 respectively, and declined in 1994 to about 16,000. It repeated the trend in the next four years
. Regardless, the number
of thefts
in Great Britain
for every thousand
vehicles
never exceed 20,000 nor was it lower than 15,000 in the period between 1990 and 1999.
While
the other countries to seem
fluctuate, Sweden was only unstable in the first 3 Add the particle
toseem
years
, starting at about 8,000 and dropping to nearly 6,000 in 1991. It started to rise again and stopped increasing from 1996 to 1998, staying the same at about 12,000.
In 1999, while
France seemed to stay the same at approximately 6,000, Canada and Sweden's number
of thefts
per thousand
vehicles
had a rising trend, whereas
Great Britain
tended to decline.Submitted by crystalphan77 on
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