The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
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The line graph above illustrates the
number
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of
thefts
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for every
thousand
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vehicles
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in 4 different countries over a decade, from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, over the course of 10
years
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, Great
Britain
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remains the country that has the highest
number
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of people who steals
vehicles
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. For the majority of the period, Canada is the country that has the lowest
thefts
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per
thousand
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vehicles
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. With regards to the trend for Great
Britain
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, every 4
years
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, the
number
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of
thefts
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reaches its peak and starts to drop again. It started from approximately 17,000 to 20,000, in 1990 to 1993 respectively, and declined in 1994 to about 16,000. It repeated the trend in the next four
years
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. Regardless, the
number
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of
thefts
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in Great
Britain
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for every
thousand
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vehicles
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never exceed 20,000 nor was it lower than 15,000 in the period between 1990 and 1999.
While
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the other countries to
seem
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fluctuate, Sweden was only unstable in the first 3
years
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, starting at about 8,000 and dropping to nearly 6,000 in 1991. It started to rise again and stopped increasing from 1996 to 1998, staying the same at about 12,000. In 1999,
while
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France seemed to stay the same at approximately 6,000, Canada and Sweden's
number
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of
thefts
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per
thousand
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vehicles
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had a rising trend,
whereas
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Great
Britain
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tended to decline.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thefts, thousand, vehicles, years, britain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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