Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town hall rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary world, the
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should
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facilities must
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on building new social
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than
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extant has sparked a heated debate in
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society.
While
many people would argue that town life could be improved only by
this
action, I contend that
this
method is distrustful. First of all, there are myriad negative outcomes which are associated with the notion that
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new buildings is much better than
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existing ones, to expound, if authorities build new construction, it will be much
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than
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old
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building
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.
For instance
, in 2017 Astana city hall spent approximately 700
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dollars to make new cinema,
however
, renovating
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cinema
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had been costed only 70
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.
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, new buildings cut
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of the town,
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means that
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where
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can
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house
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,
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was used to make
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a museum
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museum
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. So,
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the near future cons impacts
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rising house prices and homelessness could not be avoided. Moving
further
, if local hall
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past area buildings, it will
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destroy
style
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the style
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of the local town or city.
For example
, Europe governments never demolish their
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style. Manu Europe cities
such
as Paris, Madrid, Viena, London were constructed many countries ago and now
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places are
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treasure
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of each country which have own style. As I said before,
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governing
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can innovate
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budlings and made there
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better if modern conditions will be added.
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if government construct
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building where past edifice will disappear? Removing old edifice cost amount of money,
thus
, it is not effective to do
this
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.
To sum up
, the main reason behind the
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money to build new contractions does not correlate with the modern economic and social systems. In my opinion, there is no doubt that
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nowadays there
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no better
way
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than
recrate
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recreate
exist
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structures.
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