Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous, recommend a driving school, give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear Keith, Hi there! Hope you are doing well and all your family are doing well too. I am

also

fine despite

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some hard work. I’m delighted to know you are going to learn

driving

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to drive

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. Ever since you asked me for my opinion about driving, I’ve been kicking around the matter before writing

this

letter. I opine you should have had the skill years ago. Anyway better late than never. I think it is worthwhile learning the driving as it has several benefits. First of all, you will get

driving

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license.

This

means you will get rid of depending on the obnoxious driver you have. You can go anywhere, anytime you want to.

In other words

, you can enjoy a great deal of freedom.

Apart from

this

, the driving license will serve as your personal

I.D

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. You can use it in a variety of places

for instance

, opening an account, writing a cheque, applying for

loan

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, using a debit or credit card, and so forth. And most importantly, it will be very worthwhile if you encounter an accident. Let me explain a bit more. Suppose you have a wreck, are badly wounded, and can’t communicate with

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respondent, they

then

will search your billfold for your driver’s license to identify who you are.

However

, there is one thing you might want to know about

the

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driving schools. To the best of my knowledge, Kingfisher driving school would be perfect for you. You must, of course, use your own judgment, but I would suggest

this

. There is one more thing you have to consider

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‘don’t drive on the highways until you become confident of your competence’.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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