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In the future all cars , buses and trucks will be driverless.the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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It is predicted that in our perspective of modern life
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 proposed technology , vehicles regardless of private or public will not need a
driver
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 to drive them ,and
people
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 use them just as commuters. In my point of view, there are significant benefits with
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 new hypothesis which are outweighed the drawbacks.
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 with, on one hand,
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 transport may consider the safer type of transportation since it will be free of human errors
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 as being sleepy,drunk , and careless or they will not be in rush to reach their destination.
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, as long as the fuel for charging the car is provided, the risk of an accident will considerably be less than the time a
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 drives an automobile since the software does not experience tiredness or sleepiness or other factors that can have an impact on the
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's concentration.
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, unlawful driving activities
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 as driving over the limit speed or crossing the red light might be seen by
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 transport.
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,even if the passenger is in rush to reach his or her destination, the car will not drive faster than the limit speed or it will observe all traffic rules regardless of the situation of the passengers.
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, driving will no more be considered an occupation for the communities and following that a numerous number of
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 will be unemployed.Namely, in developing ,countries the number of
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 who work as a
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 is dramatically high and if in these countries
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 car replaces current vehicles many
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 will lose their career.
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,machines are not infallible and if any short circuits happen in their systems, probably they can cause unforgettably disasters.
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, the lives of many travellers may threaten if any error happens in the system of a bus or train.
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,
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 there are some detrimental consequences
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 emerging
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 vehicles to societies, the merits of
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 technology have a noticeable impact on our lives and improve our safety
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 a higher quality of life and welfare.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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