The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs give information about mobile
phone
owners
using various mobile phone
features in 2006, 2008 and 2010. It can be inferred that making calls, sending and receiving text messages and taking photos were the top three features that mobile phone
owners
mostly used.
On top of that, 100% of mobile phone
owners
were using their phones to make calls in 2006 and 2008. Although
messaging application was a bit popular in 2010, making calls was still a favourite among mobile phone
owners
as illustrated from the graphs, the percentage slightly fell by only 1%. Sending and receiving messages have been done by 73% of mobile phone
owners
in 2006. It significantly increased to 75% in 2008 and added four more per cent in 2010.
Lastly
, as technology always developed from time to time, the camera feature on the mobile phone
was used by 66% of mobile phone
owners
in 2006 and significantly grew by 10% in the last
period.Submitted by emailduringexcersice on
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