The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The line graph illustrates in the media the carbon dioxide discharge per individual in three countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007.
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throughout the years, the United Kingdom and Sweden saw a decrease, Italy and Portugal had an increase in C02 emissions. Portuguese are the population that produces less Co2 emission. From 1967 to 1997, Sweden and Italy rose significantly in their emission, just over about 8 and 6 metric
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, respectively. From that year,
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Italy continued a steady increase and reached just under 8 metric
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plateau in 1997 to 2007, the Swedish population continued a dramatic fall and lowered its carbon emissions to less than 6 metric
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in 2007. Portugal saw a constant rise from 1967 to 1997 ,
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reaching a plateau of under 6 metric tons. Even though the UK produces more CO2 emissions of more than 10 metric
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compared to the other 3, throughout the year it just decrease and reached just over 8 in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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